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What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist.
He brooded darkly over the insult of being chased away like a common thief from her house. Gathering some friends for support, he waited outside her house, biding his time. After a while she sauntered out, and they swooped down with raucous cries. Taken aback, she dashed back inside, but not before he had pecked hard on her tail making her yelp.
Revenge was sweet.
©Shail Mohan 2015
Gulshan. said:
Booed brooding beaks
Wait till tail tweaks
Then, swoop
She: whoop
Swiftly shelter seeks!
shail said:
Brilliantly limerick-ed! 🙂
lifestyleproblog said:
Ha ha… That was a good punch you packed in!
shail said:
Thank you 🙂
Usha Pisharody said:
Aha! The Revenge of the Feathered Fleet 😛
shail said:
On the canine 😉
Sheila said:
Excellent! Succinct, great description and imagery. Nice
shail said:
Thank you, Sheila. 🙂
UmaS said:
So…what do you expect from a bird lady huh ?? 😛 😛
Been a long time and absolutely enjoyed the twist – pecked hard on her tail 😀
shail said:
😀 And good to see you 😀
D K Powell said:
Ha ha! I can imagine this story came from a real event!
shail said:
Bingo! 😀