You gave me up so easily
As if, it mattered the least.
A turbulent silence stretches uneasily
Like a treacherously calm sea.
– Shail Mohan (Jan 2011)
05 Wednesday Jan 2011
You gave me up so easily
As if, it mattered the least.
A turbulent silence stretches uneasily
Like a treacherously calm sea.
– Shail Mohan (Jan 2011)
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Beautifully written – as usual !
Happy New year to you and your family Shail !
@Ruchira Shukla,
Thank you Ruchira. And wish you the same π
Is it the calm before the storm?
it gnaws at the heart like a woodworm
Can it be viewed as a norm
or will it take a sinister form?
“treacherously calm sea”-beautiful choice of words. This is my first comment in 2011. π
@Govind,
Thank you Govind. Congrats on your first comment π BTW you have not commented on the quatrain I wrote (Inanities) using the 3 words for 3WW of the week.
Deep. And treacherously calm. Loved it. A happy new year to you.
@Indian Homemaker,
Thank you and the same to you π
A lovely take on the word calm.
Nice one Shail.
Happy New Year.
Shail
@Shail Raghuvanshi,
Thank you π Happy New Year to you too
Shail , I am becoming a great fan of your four liners π
Happy new year to you and family . Special wishes to Ruby !!
@Krishnaleela,
Fan away you fan! π Thanks Aswathy π
Happy New Year to you and yours too. I will convey the wishes to Ruby …and I hope there are some for Bonny too?? π
I can truly say thise lines to someone π
beautiful lines
@Bikram,
Thanks. So are you going to tell them?? π
Beautiful poetry
the deepest of waters can be so deceiving… something so sad spoken so poetically making it appear something altogether different…m