Tags
challenge, free verse, postaday, silence, tongue in cheek, verse
Some think
(do they indeed?!)
they know
how wide the margin should be
while someone else writes poetry
The gall, they sniff
keeping lines too small
and calling it, what, poetry?
You must be crazy!
If you keep your lines too long and like a road, winding
(like this one)
yet others chime in,
Oh I can’t stop yawning
This is too damn boring.
Shape poetry has some in a twist
Micro is not to their finicky taste
Haiku?
You are cuckoo!
Free verse is for the lazy
Make an effort
Get it metered, you fool!
There is more
to add to what’s come before
Rhymes aren’t totally approved
Are you in kindergarten?
Is the disdainful ruse used
So
whether
you
keep
your
margins
real
small
or keep them wide, never-ending and ingeniously long
or perfectly trimmed
(like a french beard)
and shaped
(like the perfect eyebrows)
you lose the spin
their’s is always the win
Poetic hearts
(apparently)
do not have a say
in their heartfelt poetry
Critics want it all
their way
So here’s my answer
laid bare:
Don’t be stingy
give them (the critics) freely
of silence.
Make it exceptionally loud
so they hear it clearly!
Β©Shail Mohan 2016
A nice and thoughtful poem π
Thank you, and welcome to Shail’s Nest π
Ingenious!
Thank you π
They say silence is deafening
your poem,in a way it is heartening
do what you like and not to anybody’s liking
what’ll you think of me, you just caught me rhyming.
Govind, I echo what you wrote
You and i are in the same boat
At the drop of a hat
Rhymes come out pat
We have to be wary ‘cos many don’t dote!
LOL!! I will follow that last verse….just cause I am perverse..I like rhymes, do I care if its a crime…As long as I can say what I want, I look through most affront.
Besides whic, silence was the prompt word for today π π
The sound of silence can say a whole lot
Deafening it might be to the noisy lot
If margins matter
To the latter
Rhyme and reason will be their logical lot!
Haha!
You are too good, Shail! Beautiful words used appropriately!
Thank you, Sandhya π