Inseparable halves
kicked far apart by Destiny, wander
waiting to be whole.
– Shail Mohan (March 2011)
Inseparable
21 Monday Mar 2011
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@Indian Homemaker,
Yes 🙂
Shail, so glad you made it to the Writer’s Island! Nice to see you in a different setting.
What a bittersweet haiku. It’s true: When true loves are parted, they will wander to the ends of the earth to get back to each other. And sometimes, the parting happens when they are together, and the journey is all about relating…
Here’s mine: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/21/a-mothers-ferocious-love/
Peace, Amy
@Sharp Little Pencil,
Thank you. Its nice to be a part of WI too. 🙂
They have to get back to each other somewhere, sometime… there is no choice 🙂
The separation causing a lot of pain
the parts long to be whole again.
They do so with a lot of strain
inseparable forever they remain.
🙂 🙂 🙂
@Govind,
No, cannot be forever 🙂
apt words.
love it.
cheers , mine is up.
@Jingle,
Thank you 🙂
I think this is lovely; so delicate.
@Tilly Bud,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest and thanks 🙂
Inseparable?
Then how are they parted?
You, poets and writers, have a license to use words as you please.
Not us poor engineers.
Often we draw to communicate, as words are never enough.
“Drawing is the language of engineers”
A line means just a line, not a circle!
Inseparable means just that, “inseparable”, come Destiny or whatever.
Just kidding.
Enjoy your license.
Regards
GV
@G Vishwanath,
When they were kicked apart by Destiny! 🙂 Lol, but yes. Luckily so, we have this so called license! 😛
If Inseparable, destiny shall unite.
@Premi,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest. Destiny kicked, now Destiny itself has to step in to unite 🙂
I dislike destiny in this occasion. Why does it enjoy being a sadist? Realistic haiku using the prompt.
@Rashmi,
I do too 🙂
Thank you 🙂
HHHmmmm….interesting. 🙂
I like your take on the prompt. It takes something as powerful as Destiny (capital D) to kick apart the inseparable.