broken bits of fire
stitched together every morning
by kindhearted leaves
a blazing ball of fire
cut into bits every morning
by merciless leaves
The above is what happens when you look at a picture you have taken and compose diametrically opposite lines. Which one of the two do you think goes with the picture?
© Shail Mohan 2018
Great photo, well composed.
Thank you 🙂
The kindhearted leaves … This is an interesting idea.
a blazing ball of fire
cut into bits every morning
by merciless leaves
Simply because it seems to fit the picture. 🙂
A lovely picture, and I like both. What if the blazing ball of fire was cut into bits by kind-hearted leaves?
The second one.
I am not a dangerous person, believe me!
Oh I just had tepid tea (shudder) and thought of you!
Hahahaha!
The pic is amazing and I loved both verses…
the second one a little more than the first! 😀
Thank you, Pixie. 🙂