The funeral pyre of the night
lit at dawn, by the eastern sky
shall blaze forth, consume the day
and spent, die at the hands of feeble twilight
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Fire, lit by the sky
to make a cup of morning tea,
blazes uncontrollable
awaiting death by celestial firefighters
* * * * * * *
In the east, there’s fire
quick, with your lens, capture
before it spreads and the color leaches
leaving a canvas bare
©Shail Mohan 2016
Even your poem paints a vivid picture
Leave alone your photographic capture
The way your words weave
The ideas you conceive
Leave all of us in breathless rapture!
Thank you, Gul. May I return the compliment for the brilliant limerick-response? 🙂