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Expressive expressions
expressly unexpressed
in bottomless chasms
suppressed.
Mind refusing to delve
on feelings detrimental
recoils from retrieval
pretending instead, to be a broken sieve.
Lips once powerfully articulate
played on words as on a lute
now unable to translate
remain powerlessly mute.
Without help of rising tides
Helplessness drowns the insides
And expressive expressions languish
to the spiritโs deep anguish.
– Shail Mohan (Nov 2010)
Very expressive:) Beautifully written !
@Ruchira Shukla,
Thank you ๐
‘Lips once powerfully articulate
played on words as on a lute
now unable to translate
remain powerlessly mute. ‘ – Beautifully true !!
@Aswathy,
Yes, sometimes the most expressively articulate can turn mute ๐
๐ naiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
lovely jubley
Bikram’s
@bikram,
Thanks for the jubley comment! ๐ ๐
The fate of the words unsaid
which long since gone and dead
but somewhere runs a tiny thread
that leads to a heart that bled.
@Govind,
๐ Good lines!
sathyam parayaalo, oru kundhavum manasilaayilla !! ๐ ๐ ๐ not your fault, enikku adinu maathram IQ illa ! ๐ ๐ ๐
@vimmuuu,
Ayyo don’t be so modest! ๐ ๐
Absolutely Beautiful Expression of the Unexpressed. You know you speak for me.. dont you? Thank you for saying what I have been feeling :).
@Rashmi,
Yeah, just as you speak for me ๐ Thank you! ๐
//Lips once powerfully articulate
played on words as on a lute//
Very nice and I also loved Govind’s response!
@Indian Homemaker,
Thanks. Yes, good one from Govind ๐
WOW Shail, I knew you were a great story teller but never imagined you were such a great poet too.
Exquisite use of words there. A well-expressed poetry! ๐ What a way of self-expression! ๐ Great job!!!!
@Vibhuti B,
Oh wow wow. I better be careful or else I will float away! ๐ Thank you Vibz ๐