Your crowded heart makes me suffocate
There is not enough love for sustenance
When I go away from you I am free to breathe
But then there is not enough love either…
– Shail Mohan
Enough love
01 Monday Nov 2010
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bada problem hai yeh to…
@hitchy,
Lol, yeah 😛
@hitchy, LOL 😆
Nice poem ….. LOL at Hitchy’s comment, complete emosanal attyachaar
@Phoenixritu,
Lol, yeah I guess it is emosanal attyachaar at its best 😛
Good one Shail….giving space in a relationship is as essential as loving the other !!! Wish we realise it, before its too late !!!
@UmaS,
Hmm… I guess that’s not what I meant. But I appreciate the different interpretation 🙂
Good one, Shail! Both the partners need space, for a permanent relationship to continue happily!
@Sandhya,
Thanks. I guess you have interpreted it the same way as Uma has 🙂
big problem big big one
if love is there a problem if not then also problem
very veyr duvidha here 🙂 he he hehe
i guess a bit of space is always welcome ..
Bikram’s
@bikram,
Lol, yeah duvidha hai. Hmm… you too think its about space?? 🙂
Duh me did not understand, but will come back to read it again.
@Pallavi,
Come back, come back! I want to hear what you have to say 🙂
Lovely poem, and so true! 🙂
@Priya Iyer,
Thanks 🙂
why did I think , it was about a man ( i am biased ) who is flirting with another woman and whose first love obviously can’t stay in sharing accomodation yet feels sad while leaving him …………full fledge Ekta kapoor’s story line.
loved it completely.
@kirti,
Full marks to you for seeing it the way I have written 🙂 But you wouldn’t call it Ekta Kapoor story line, would you?? Isn’t it much too common a story line, and in existence even before the advent of the K-soaps??
You are right about this being a very common story line. Infact , a woman would genuinely feel hurt and sad if her man cheats on her and her self respect would force her to walk out.
I am really pleased that I saw it the way you wrote it.
🙂
@kirti,
🙂
I too sympathise with Hitchie’s duvidha.
@Indian Homemaker,
😆
Oh!!! Just read Kirti’s comment… makes a lot of sense!
@Indian Homemaker,
Yeah, Kirti got it. 🙂
reading kirti’s comment you biased people… why couldnt it be like the girl is cheating and the boy is writing this huh ???
@hitchy,
Of course you have a point! To be gender neutral, it could be either way! 😉