When we met
and knew in an instant
we were meant to be…
when nothing mattered
not the chains that fettered
or the ropes that bound…
when music was
your whispered words
and its rhythm your heartbeat
when it rained nothing but love
washing away eons of loneliness
and the circle of your arms
became the universe
the happiest days of my life
had come to stay
never to leave again…
-Shail Mohan (Oct 2009)
Beautiful !!!! and so happy 😀
Me: Yeah, happy yes! Love makes one happy doesn’t it?? 😀 Thanks Hitch.
Too good 🙂 Once again a masterpiece!!
Me: Thanks Niv! You be careful, I might just float away! 😉
your words express the bond between loving hearts…..Cheers!!!
Me: Yes it does. Thanks Unnichetta.
Your romantic poems makes me go all mushy inside 🙂 Especially loved “and the circle of your arms became the universe” …Beautiful!
Me: Your name itself suggests that! 😉 Thanks Dreamer!!
Very nice- gives a feeling of contentment.
Me: Love does give contentment. Thanks Manju. 🙂
That’s about the all encompassing, all embracing, unconditional love, profoundly written.
Me: Welcome Sasichetta and thank you so much! 🙂
cho chweet…beautiful, as usual!!!
Me: Thank you Ganga! 🙂
thats a beautiful little romantic poem… enjoyed it 🙂
Me: Welcome Sinu and thanks. Why didn’t you post the url to your blog?? Let some of my friends see your artwork! 🙂
Awh !!!
Me: Thanks Post Script! 🙂
Wow! I am lost for words!
Me: What! No four-liner?? :O
🙂
So touching..
“Love is when you both can sit silently for hours and still walk walk away with the feel of having the best conversation in your life” 🙂
Me: So true! 🙂
Those are real happy moments Shaila
Me: Couldn’t agree more Vivek.
So romantic! wonderfully penned expressions…lovely to read. and yes, I feel so happy about you.
Me: Welcome Deependra and thank you for the appreciation.
touched my heart 🙂 lovely one
Me: Thanks Monika! 🙂