15 Tuesday Mar 2011
Posted in challenge, creative expressions, poetry
Passionate moments
stolen without regret
when arms held as close as could
what never belonged
and lips locked,
clandestinely sealing unwritten accords,
unsuccessfully trying to rewrite
a few new lines
into an old story,
already published…
– Shail Mohan (March 2011)
Written for OSI Prompt 159: Passionate
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Awesome!!!
@Writerzblock,
Thank you 🙂
You have done it so well by adding new life into the age old story!!
@Nanka,
Aww… thank you 🙂
🙂 oooh someone’s getting all romantic romantic 🙂
lovely poem 🙂
Bikram’s
@bikram,
Lol, thank you 😀
Ahhh…those stolen moments Shail…everyone has a piece of memory or two about it!
I suddenly felt wanting some stolen moments…:)
@Amity,
Count me in 😉
Love how you play with words!
@Indian Homemaker,
🙂
Stolen moments are always thrilling even after 20 years!!
@Sandhya,
Haha. How true! 😀
It is so very hard to conceal
the thrill of being on a ferris wheel
A universal and a timeless appeal
in the end it was one hell of a steal.
🙂 🙂 🙂
@Govind,
Always is 🙂
Stolen moments… no regrets. Good.
@Harshad,
🙂
a few new lines into an old story….sums up a lot of relationships. Well done with this prompt!
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@Geraldine,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest and thank you 🙂
unsuccessfully trying to rewrite
a few new lines
into an old story,
already published…
So very beautiful! I loved this one!!!
@Neeraja,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest and thank you. Let me add that I simply love your poetry 🙂
@Shail, Thank you so much. I am very honored. 🙂 I love your’s too.
cool write.
@Jingle,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest and thank you 🙂
So close to life..lovely poem
@Vivek,
Thanks 🙂
That was lovely Shail. Very simple yet very meaningful.
@Deboshree,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest 🙂 and thank you.
Wow!
Wow! Truly passionate!
@Scorpria,
Yeah?? Thanks 🙂