07 Tuesday Dec 2010
My love is formless
infinite, free and untamed…
You drew invisible lines to contain
that which cannot be.
Rendered mute,
I languish
Imprisoned by feelings I cannot restrain,
I await my ultimate freedom.
– Shail Mohan (Dec 2010)
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All I ask is to let me be free
it is not much as you will agree
then why do do you make me dree
is death the only recovery?
Beautiful. 🙂
@Govind,
Thank you Govind 🙂
Intense feelings put in words.
@Harshad,
Thank you 🙂
strong feelings but awaiting death is no solution.
Life should go on as long as you are alive 😀
Now who said this?? 🙂
Have a great day Shail!!
@Nanka,
Nanka just said that??!! 😀 Thank you 🙂
Nice poem, hope all is well, I hope whoever tortures reads this. Cheers.
@Chris,
All well thank you Krishnan 🙂 Torture is a strong word 🙂
@Shail, I meant the mental torture. One of my friends in India is suffering this from her husband on a daily basis, I don’t know how one can hope to keep the love alive in that.
@Chris,
That is so true! 😦
are you locked up in a bathroom ?? 😀 😀 😀
@vimmuuu,
Is that how you feel when you are locked in one?? 😛 😀
@Shail, LOL no, thats how I feel before I get into the bathroom ! 😀 😀 😀
@vimmuuu,
I should have known! 😛 😀
Inner strength is what it is all about…. facing the challenges of life.. even if they are posed by heart.. I felt the poem full of pain.. but isn’t it part of life.. and acceptance of pain the ultimate freedom..being fully alive with truth..
@Ramesh Sood,
Inner strength is everything 🙂 I agree, accepting the pain is ultimate freedom in a sense.
Don’t we all! This is so true, the ultimate freedom is such a personal state of mind. Nice work.
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@Geraldine,
Welcome to Shail’s Nest. Indeed, ultimate freedom IS a state of mind. The sooner you get there, the better 🙂
Anithesis is the core of this beautiful poem!
This line hurts!
“Imprisoned by feelings I cannot restrain,”
Beautiful, Shail, just that!
Uh-oh! typo 😦 Antithesis*
@Usha,
It definitely does hurt 🙂
Thank you Usha 🙂
Yet again, in a few words, you speak for me. I do wonder if those lines are imaginary too. After all it was someone elses lines, so why cant we re-draw it?