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Dreams…
Of waking in your arms
To the beats of your heart
Every single morn
Dreams…
Of a shared cup of tea
Beneath the sprawling tree
Just you and me
Dreams…
Of my head on your shoulder
Listening to you sing
A song of love
Dreams…
Of the falling rain
Drenching us as it pours
And we kiss
Dreams…
Of being together
Two bodies but one soul
Now and forever
Dreams….
– Shail Mohan (Nov 2008)
This post was written as part of a challenge to write something on the theme ‘dreams’ and was showcased at sulekha.com. Reposted from shail-mohan blogs @ sulekha.com
‘Listening to you sing
A song of love’
Taking me down the memory lane once again 🙂 Such a sweet poem… simple and sweet… yet pounding my heart deeeep!
Thanks Bubbly! Memories… Hmmmm…
nice thoughts, nice words…
Thanks Ganga!
aye! These are dreams that should Come True.:).
Thanks Rashmi! Yessss!!!
Well written… dreams… hmmmm
Thanks Dhiren!
Ahh mush and sweetness – pity one has to wake up.
Oh no Ritu, I dream with my eyes open!! 😉
Hi Shail,
You’ve been tagged here http://deeps-speakingup.blogspot.com/2008/12/yet-another-tag.html
Do it if possible and let me know when you’ve done it
Thanks:)
Ooops! Another tag?? 😦 Well, after I have done Shaili’s tag. Will let you know Deeps!
Lovely, soulful, poetic dreams
Flow from you in gentle streams
How we love rain
It banishes pain
As do cold-wintry sunshine beams.
Awww… beautiful words Gulshan!!
loved those lines..cheers
Thanks Praveen!
Sugar and spice and all that’s nice, that’s what such dreams are made up of 🙂
Yes, IHM. and, sigh, what else can you expect from an incurable romantic??
May all your dreams come true
Wow Thank you PRG!
The sweet dreams of a young girl thinking about the future?
Lovely poem, Shail!
Hmmm… could be of an older woman still young at heart!! 😉 😛 Thanks Manju!
Sweet dreams–
The kind that
We dread waking from.
Very nice, Shailaja
Bob
Thanks Bob! Like I wrote in a comment above, I see them with my eyes open. So no fear of waking up from them! 😛
This is such a nice poem.
Luv,
Ru
Hey Ru!!!!! Welcome. So nice to see you. Thanks!! 🙂
Ooooh! Lovely and romantic 🙂
Just love the thought of dreams, and you’ve got a few lovely delicious ones here 🙂
Thanks, Usha. More than a decade late, I know 😉
What a beautiful poem on dreams, flows so well and tells a wonderful story.
Thank you for the appreciation. 🙂