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What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie McFerrin posts a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate can write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in the five sentences, and is just for direction. This week: FRESH
A fresh lease of life, that is what my show needed to get it out of the rut it had fallen into.
My cheap tricks were failing miserably with the crowds, and the already meager earnings from it had hit rock bottom.
If only I could get my hands on a decent sum, I’d revive the show with some much needed new costumes, flashy props and a prettier, sexier assistant (or maybe two if I could manage it) to hold the attention of the crowds at crucial moments of my performance.
That was why I was standing where I had vowed never to return, in the palatial house, in front of my wealthy aristocratic parents, my hands extended for a few scraps of their charity.
The scorn on their faces was my undoing, and when my red hot rage had subsided I realized that I’d need more than magic to explain away all the blood on my hands and also everywhere else in the room.
©Shail Mohan 2015
Really well done, that last sentence is a clincher 🙂
Thank you, Jairam 🙂
not the ending I expected! Love it!
Thank you, and welcome to Shail’s Nest 🙂
A tale that captures mind and interest. What a heart-pounding climax!
Thanks, Vishal 🙂
Loved the morbid ending!
Thanks, Jay. Debated for a while if it was too morbid. But sometimes once an idea comes, no other seems just the same 🙂
OH NO..
i wonder what was going on in his mind and what made him od all that
Yes. Only he knows 🙂
Omg!! Didn’t expect that end! Well done!
Aditi
Thank you, Aditi 🙂
You have a gift for this kind of writing. Another great flash fiction piece!
Thanks, Ken. I am glad you think so. 🙂
Never expected such an end to this tale.
Unexpected, eh? 🙂
You are excellent with this. Absolutely wonderful take on the prompt!
Thanks, Debo. Glad for the comment 🙂
Twist in the tale was unexpected! Very good narration, Shail!
Thank you, Sandhya. 🙂
Oh my !! A performer sure he is !! Loved the twist 🙂