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What itโ€™s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie McFerrin posts a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate can write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in the five sentences, and is just for direction. This week: IRRITATION.


And whaddya know, I have two of them today ๐Ÿ˜‰


His irritation at some lapse on her part was obvious in the way his brows were deeply furrowed..

She started hyperventilating wondering what she had got wrong this time.

The very next moment he sent the laden plate flying with one angry swipe of his hand.

The food was splattered all over her and the floor.

Thatโ€™s when she realised she had forgotten the customary glass of water when she set the table for dinner.



She looked through the clothes inside her wardrobe, chose a few, but flung them all away from her in irritation.

She wanted something that no one had seen her wear before, something spanking new and different too that made her stand out at the party the next day.

Suddenly she hit upon the perfect idea, after all she had the skill, although acquired reluctantly at the insistence of her mother.

That evening whenย her mother got home,ย the daughter was busy putting the final touches to the newly stitched dress.

Theย motherโ€™s proud smile of approval faltered and almost disappeared when she saw bits and pieces of her much loved sari littering the floor.


Lillie McFerrin Writes

NaBloPoMo November 2014

ยฉShail Mohan 2014