I hear the refrigerator door being shut. Footsteps hurry upstairs. My door is pushed open unceremoniously.
“Where is it?” He asks without preamble.
I am prepared. Looking up from my book with that perfect pre-occupied look, I ask,
“What?”
“The leftover pudding!”
“Ohh! I ate that!” The look on his face is priceless.
“My share too?!!!” There is murder in his voice.
“You said you’d be celebrating some place!”
“But I called to say my plans had changed!”
“Your call came late!” I reply primly.
He kicks the door as he walks out.
Revenge tasted sweeter than Mom’s biscuit pudding.
100 Words On Saturday 11 Prompt: YOUR CALL
Thumbelina81 said:
That was so cute lady
shail said:
Thank you 🙂
Shilpa Garg said:
LOL 😀 that was a sweet revenge! Loved your take on this prompt! 🙂
shail said:
Thanks Shilpa 🙂
Grace Grits and Gardening said:
Haha. Cute!
shail said:
Welcome to Shail’s Nest Grace and thank you 🙂
Usha Pisharody said:
Your call?
You took that a level and beyond.
Take a bow, story-teller!!! I’m left dumbstruck at the deft way you pulled that off. All in just 100 words 😀
shail said:
Aww… thanks Ush 😀 Back in school I used to hate Precis writing. I wish I could go back and do those exercises now 😉
76sanfermo said:
Superb piece of prose in 100 words!
shail said:
Thank you for the appreciation 🙂
Wanderer said:
Lol cute revenge.
shail said:
Something that keeps going on between siblings 🙂
vishalbheeroo said:
Nice one..haha and love it:)
shail said:
Thank you Vishal 🙂
Gulshan said:
The cat that ate the canary
Left him totally unwary
She polished her whiskers
Of biscuit-pudding leftovers
Guilt or regret? Nah, she’s no Good Fairy!
shail said:
Haha! Love it, Gulshan 🙂
Rainbow Hues said:
So cute!
shail said:
🙂
pixie said:
So cute! 🙂
I love your play of words 🙂
shail said:
Thanks Pixie 🙂
Bhavya (@Bhav_Zz) said:
LOL 😀 I loved your take on this prompt!
shail said:
Thank you Bhavya 🙂
Corinne Rodrigues said:
Haha!! Good for her – too bad he didn’t call soon enough! 😉
shail said:
I know 😉
janakinagaraj said:
Hahaha…good one.
shail said:
🙂
menons129 said:
A sweet revenge. Why did’nt he call earlier!!
shail said:
Yes! Welcome to Shail’s Nest 🙂
Roshni said:
awww! Poor baby! 😀
shail said:
Hehe 😀
Suzy said:
Loved your take on the prompt and the pun on the “sweet” revenge. Very nicely done.
shail said:
Thank you Suzy 🙂