Comments on: Your eyes… and other quatrains.

By: Shail

Shail — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 07:32:14 +0000

Thank you PRG. No I haven’t. Though people, starting from my elder son, have been asking me to since some time, only when these quatrains came about has the thought entered my head. *still thinking about it*

By: PRG

PRG — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 07:00:03 +0000

Great stuff,I think you should publish them, if you have not already done

By: Shail

Shail — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 07:52:07 +0000

Thank you Ganga!

By: ganga

ganga — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 07:19:54 +0000

nice stuff

By: Shail

Shail — Wed, 05 Nov 2008 14:03:44 +0000

Usha, wow! Thank you, thank you! *takes a bow*

Rashmi, I read your poem, but was unable to leave a comment at your wordpress blog.

IHM, thanks. Yes, that one is sad.

Ritu, I like the funny ones you write!

By: Ritu

Ritu — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 11:59:23 +0000

Lovely stuff, soft and emotional. I try but cant do mush – so I settle for the funnies instead

By: indianhomemaker

indianhomemaker — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 10:15:56 +0000

Lovely each of them… ‘All Wrong’ is sad

By: Rashmi

Rashmi — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 01:30:36 +0000

I love the Eyes(1/2/3), Our Names, Lesions and Retreat best. In those you speak for me. I wrote something like Retreat, will post it soon.. Happy Diwali!

By: Usha

Usha — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 15:09:10 +0000

Delightful, simply delightful!

I am not sure which I like the most; so I shall not let myself choose Each of them is special, and so evocative!

The imagery and the exquisite beauty of the dress of moonbeams in the first one

Then, Your Eyes .. oh my, oh my! they really enchant!!

The hint of poignancy and the latent pain in Our Names, and Lesions, hold stories in themselves!
Loved this post!