Your eyes… and other quatrains.

Fly me to the moon…

Take my hand, fly me to the moon

Sitting on the edge of moon craters

We shall savor strawberry ice cream

For you I shall wear my gown of moonbeams.

Our names

I write your name on the sand along with mine

The waves rush in and thoughtlessly erase

Maybe the sea knows like us that ‘we’ can never be

Hence sends in the waves promptly.

All wrong

Our meeting is all wrong

You wanted someone along

Your spare time to kill

I don’t fit the bill.

Pretence

Don’t try to wake me in the morning

I am only pretending to sleep

As I snuggle closer to you

Don’t let the alarm beep.

Retreat

I am not hungry, I don’t want to eat

Let me cry some more in my defeat

From life, love and most of all you

I want forever to retreat.

New lesions

You lay me beneath the stars

And with your kisses wipe away the scars

Will the morrow bring new lesions

To replace these old ones??

Terrified

Why did you invite me into your lair

Bind me with silken threads of love??

I am mortally terrified of spiders

But love terrifies me even more.

Your eyes (1)

Don’t hide your eyes behind dark glasses

Though they be in style

They don’t let me see the creases

When you look at me and smile.

Your eyes (2)

Let me kiss your eyes

and close them for a while

They hold me in a spell

My feelings I cannot quell

Your eyes (3)

Don’t you know I cannot swim

I flounder helplessly in the depth of your eyes

And yet do not take your eyes off me my love

Let me drown and just die in the pools of your eyes

– Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)


9 Responses to “Your eyes… and other quatrains.”

  1. Delightful, simply delightful!

    I am not sure which I like the most; so I shall not let myself choose :) Each of them is special, and so evocative!

    The imagery and the exquisite beauty of the dress of moonbeams in the first one :)

    Then, Your Eyes .. oh my, oh my! they really enchant!!

    The hint of poignancy and the latent pain in Our Names, and Lesions, hold stories in themselves!
    Loved this post! :)

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  2. I love the Eyes(1/2/3), Our Names, Lesions and Retreat best. In those you speak for me. I wrote something like Retreat, will post it soon.. Happy Diwali!

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  3. Lovely each of them… ‘All Wrong’ is sad :(

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  4. Lovely stuff, soft and emotional. I try but cant do mush – so I settle for the funnies instead

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  5. Usha, wow! Thank you, thank you! *takes a bow*

    Rashmi, I read your poem, but was unable to leave a comment at your wordpress blog.

    IHM, thanks. Yes, that one is sad.

    Ritu, I like the funny ones you write! :)

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  6. nice stuff :)

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  7. Thank you Ganga! :)

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  8. Great stuff,I think you should publish them, if you have not already done

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  9. Thank you PRG. No I haven’t. Though people, starting from my elder son, have been asking me to since some time, only when these quatrains came about has the thought entered my head. *still thinking about it* :P

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