Rascal love

Words

meanings lost in transit

create havoc

change white to black…

Upheavals in closed chambers

return favors

making strangers

of lovers…

Broken bits

flotsam and jetsam

flow down salty rivers

seeking salvation…

Some others buried

in silences

deeper than the deepest

where none dare excavate…

Rascal Love

in momentary hiding

mischievously laughs

in derision….

- Shail Mohan (March 2010)

10 Responses to “Rascal love”

  1. What is that you call a rascal love
    Is it the one that teases you and how!
    or is it the iron fist in a velvet glove
    or is it what takes you to the edge and gives you a shove.

    WHAT? :)

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    Shail INDIA Reply:

    Keep guessing. :)

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  2. Oh!!! you seem to be hoplessly optimist. when I am hurled verbal injuries I cant think of time ahead when a sorry would make things perfect .All I can do is to brew the contempt.Although eventually Rascal love has its way.;)

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    Shail INDIA Reply:

    I am a hopeless optimist and a romantic to boot. ;) :P

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  3. I liked the dry wit here, the connection with title and verse comes across nicely. Visiting your blog after a long time, so will catch up on some older posts.

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    Shail INDIA Reply:

    Thanks Gyanban. Always welcome! :)

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  4. Groan, still trying to figure this one out! Slow day!!

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    Shail INDIA Reply:

    Take your time Ritu! ;)

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  5. ‘Broken bits

    flotsam and jetsam

    flow down salty rivers

    seeking salvation’

    Only this much I comprehend,
    the upheavals,
    deeper than the deepest
    salty tears can end.
    And words can un-havoc and mend.

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    Shail INDIA Reply:

    How right you are! Words have the magic to undo the damage as well. :)

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