Shail's Nest

12 Responses to “I have been there before…”

1. Usha on March 13th, 2009 at 7:52 am

   It’s the journey that calls to the heart isn’t it? Beautiful beautiful.. if at times poignant too!
   The refrain haunts!

   Me: Thanks Usha!

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2. Nikhil on March 13th, 2009 at 9:42 am

   I’d rather just get drunk…
   Brilliant poem!

   Me: You have a point Nikhil!

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3. dhiren on March 13th, 2009 at 11:35 am

   i think that is sad…

   Me: A lot of things in life unfortunately are, Dhiren.

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4. manju on March 13th, 2009 at 4:46 pm

   Lovely but haunting- seems more intense towards the end.

   Me: May be an irrelevant question here. But, what is your sun sign Manju??

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5. PRG on March 13th, 2009 at 10:42 pm

   It is nothing new
   that you are among a few
   who can make a brew
   on something as simple as deja vu.

   
   Me:

   Coffee I daily brew
   For my Lord, its nothing new
   I then take out seconds few
   To write on something like deja vu

   I know that’s a poor response. Its too late and I am all groggy. So thats the best I could come up with!

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6. Sal on March 14th, 2009 at 3:45 am

   Not sure why you want to go to a place where you have been before.
   I suggest you go to a new place the next time
   Cheers,
   Sal

   Me: Trust you to come up with something humorous Sal! Come to think of it, not a bad suggestion. Hmm…

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7. Ganga on March 14th, 2009 at 5:48 am

   Nice one…esp., the part on a promise not kept…

   Me: Thanks Ganga. It is quite hard to keep your word. Or should I say people make rash promises that they don’t ever mean to keep, way too quickly?? Lol, that is a Neptunian speaking!

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8. Deeps on March 15th, 2009 at 11:13 am

   Beautiful beautiful beautiful,Shail!Do I sense a tinge of pain here??

   Me: Hmmm… those 3 ‘beautifuls’ have made my day Deeps! When you walk the way that you are familiar with there is always a tinge of pain, isn’t it?? Well I am glad I could capture that.

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9. bindu on March 15th, 2009 at 4:42 pm

   

   Me: Thanks Bindu.

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10. J P Joshi on March 16th, 2009 at 11:08 pm

    This reminds of a song I had once heard, and then listened to, “Tum itna kyun muskara rahi ho, kya dard hai jise chhupa rahi ho…….or some words to this effect.

    Me: That IS one lovely song. Thanks J P Joshi.

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11. Rhett on March 31st, 2009 at 4:01 am

    Cant decide what it is you are talking about here. The marriage daily chores where the female is blindly led by the male or something?

    Me: Hmmm…. no. I won’t say more though I will leave it to your own imagination.

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12. nimo menon on May 16th, 2009 at 8:45 pm

    Nice-thought provoking!

    Me: Thanks Nimo and welcome to my page.

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