Happiest days…

When we met

and knew in an instant

we were meant to be…

when nothing mattered

not the chains that fettered

or the ropes that bound…

when music was

your whispered words

and its rhythm your heartbeat

when it rained nothing but love

washing away eons of loneliness

and the circle of your arms

became the universe

the happiest days of my life

had come to stay

never to leave again…

-Shail Mohan (Oct 2009)

14 Responses to “Happiest days…”

  1. Beautiful !!!! and so happy :D

    Me: Yeah, happy yes! Love makes one happy doesn’t it?? :D Thanks Hitch.

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  2. Too good :-) Once again a masterpiece!!

    Me: Thanks Niv! You be careful, I might just float away! ;)

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  3. your words express the bond between loving hearts…..Cheers!!!

    Me: Yes it does. Thanks Unnichetta.

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  4. Your romantic poems makes me go all mushy inside :) Especially loved “and the circle of your arms became the universe” …Beautiful!

    Me: Your name itself suggests that! ;) Thanks Dreamer!!

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  5. Very nice- gives a feeling of contentment.

    Me: Love does give contentment. Thanks Manju. :)

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  6. sasidharan cheruvattath INDIA on October 10th, 2009 at 7:31 pm

    That’s about the all encompassing, all embracing, unconditional love, profoundly written.

    Me: Welcome Sasichetta and thank you so much! :)

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  7. cho chweet…beautiful, as usual!!!

    Me: Thank you Ganga! :)

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  8. thats a beautiful little romantic poem… enjoyed it :)

    Me: Welcome Sinu and thanks. Why didn’t you post the url to your blog?? Let some of my friends see your artwork! :)

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  9. Awh !!!

    Me: Thanks Post Script! :)

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  10. Wow! I am lost for words!

    Me: What! No four-liner?? :O

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  11. :)

    So touching..

    “Love is when you both can sit silently for hours and still walk walk away with the feel of having the best conversation in your life” :)

    Me: So true! :)

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  12. Those are real happy moments Shaila

    Me: Couldn’t agree more Vivek.

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  13. So romantic! wonderfully penned expressions…lovely to read. and yes, I feel so happy about you.

    Me: Welcome Deependra and thank you for the appreciation.

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  14. touched my heart :) lovely one

    Me: Thanks Monika! :)

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