Grains of sand
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I count the grains of sand on the beach
They stretch as far as my eyes reach
When I am done I will tell you
Just how much I love you…
- Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)
Shail's Nest
Where fingers tap dance…
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From Thru my eyes
When my fingers tap dance on the computer keyboard the results are either some tongue in cheek humor, a verse, a short story, a rant or sometimes mere rambling prose that goes nowhere in particular.... You'll find them all. So go ahead, take your pick and be bored to death!!
Where they come from…
Very Romantic…….Love is limitless….
Cheers!!!
Me: Indeed it is limitless. Thanks Unnichetta.
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Oooooooh! I loved it ! Absolutely loved it!!!!
Me: Thanks Pal!
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I shall wait till eternity
for you to finish
your counting
and hear those
three magical words.
Shail, nothing personal, just wanted to coin a reply
)
Me: That was a beautiful response Balvinder.
I bet that’s what you’d tell Jeet (name correct??) if she were to recite these lines to you! 
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Profound and so beautifully put. Wonderful verse
Me: Thanks Ritu.
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Counting the grains in the beach will take all eternity
Am I supposed to let you do that and wait patiently
Is this the sinister part of you that is always tricky
telling me that you never thought of loving me?
I wish I could. I mean, publish !!!
Me: Lol, Govind, you have a new angle to it there!
Hmm… about publishing
‘Publish’ says the public
And I sort of panic
Isn’t it really tragic
Publishing is no picnic
My writing is sporadic
though it seems prolific
So I remain a skeptic
And about publishing a little phobic
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Hey, Shail, Is a competition going on here?! Yours and all the other poems are fabulous, really!
Me: I too love the responses here. Thanks Sandhya!
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I am a zero in coining words! Enjoyed reading this post, Shail!
Me: Ahhh who knows. One day you might be in a mood to write a few lines Sandhya!
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I am demanding & impatient
just write it down on a parchment.
Super poem maam
Me: Lol @impatient Thanks Aditya.
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How do you write such lovely lines?
What thoughts with what ideas combine?
Shail your brilliance simply shines!
And your readers comments make this blogpost divine
Me: Thanks IHM for the comment in verse! Yeah, I definitely like the comments too!
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Shail, do I even need to say this?
How do you write such beautiful lines? How many posts of yours I have bookmarked..you know.
Me: Oh well …. *blush blush* Thanks a lot Solilo.
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Woof woof!
Now here are the lines that portray love in its sheer simplicity and elegance! loved it!
Me: Oh wow a dog that appreciates poetry??!
I took a look at your blog page and am am definitely going back for more. Thanks for dropping by Kaalicharan and the compliments.
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Hi Shail, I like your blog a lot. So I have an award for you
. Please do visit my blog to collect it.
Me: In a jiffy! *rushes off*
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Nice poem…. loved it.
Me: Thank you!
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Beautiful,simply beautiful shail.I’m much in awe of you,needless to say it though,you know it
Me: Thank you Deeps!! I am overwhelmed.
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Aaawww…..
Me:
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“Love is like a handful of sand,for it will fall down if held too tightly and will fly away if held too lightly” …
Me: Thats a good one Nimmy
But I believe whether you hold it tightly or lightly or just rightly (omg that rhymed!!) if it has to go it will. Just a little piece of my own philosophy. 
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“Love-don’t hold it too light or too tight..Just let it free..If it fly away,it was never yours..”
Me: I used the phrase ‘just right’ to mean ‘let it free’
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