Frail Spontaneity

Rebuttals stand guardfrail-spontaneity.jpg

glinting knives in hands

Refusals choke into silence

Rebuffs with axes hack.

Wounded limbs chopped

lesions and cuts adorning

thrashing for life

lies frail Spontaneity.

Dwindling hope flickering

in eyes beseeching

to live to survive

in a world hostile.

Are its days numbered

the hours limited

Is time ticking

will Spontaneity be no more??

Shall it be sacrificed

at the altar of Rejection

meet an ignominious end

and die bereft, unmourned??

- Shail Mohan (Feb 2008)

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4 Responses to “Frail Spontaneity”

  1. Excellent–So profoundly true. Frail Spontaneity so necessary for the playful, the joyful, the magical moments that needful people may share–moments of refreshment, of insights, of hope, of bonding–moments so often endangered by the “world hostile” where seemingly the hard-hearted cynics attacks and destroys the spontaneous moments he/she cannot create, much less understand.

    Bravo, Shail!

  2. Thank you Bob! You have put it rather well.

  3. skipping this…as i am a “dumb-ass” in poems and paintings…
    somehow HE forgot to put that gene in me….

  4. Swathi: Skip along!! ;)

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