Shail's Nest

6 Responses to “Disowned…”

1. hitchwriter on July 9th, 2009 at 3:07 pm

   I guess this is serious… but I am serious too… if I were to write the above poem I would write changing just one word… money i/o love… !!!

   sheesh…

   Me: Lol, Hitch, this brought a smile to my face. Trust Hitch to make you laugh!

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2. Balvinder Singh on July 9th, 2009 at 4:15 pm

   Unfathomable depth………

   Me: Thanks Balvinder

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3. Nikhil on July 9th, 2009 at 5:07 pm

   Um… Do I sense a lot of pain in this…? 4 lines, but very poignant!

   Me: Thanks Nikhil. Haven’t seen you around for a long time

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4. Monika on July 10th, 2009 at 2:37 pm

   very beautiful shail

   u spin magic with words

   Me: Thanks Monika

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5. Govind on July 10th, 2009 at 7:35 pm

   The value of shade we know when it rains
   not being wanted gives one lot of pains
   and in the daytime indifference to feign
   in the night pillows with tears to stain.

   Me:

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6. J P Joshi on July 27th, 2009 at 10:40 pm

   Very powerful meaning in these few words squeezed into four lines…..

   Me: Thank you so much!

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