Arrears

I long to watch the rain fall in torrents

To gaze at dark clouds shedding copious tears

Maybe my dry eyes will learn a few tricks

How like them they can arrears release…

- Shail Mohan (Jan 2009)

12 Responses to “Arrears”

  1. Rains from dark clouds we welcome, but tears from your dark eyes we don’t. Cheers.

    Wow PRG, look who sounds poetic now!! Thanks.

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  2. Tears too are fine, Cleanses the soul. Beautiful

    Yes, tears do that too. Thanks Chirag.

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  3. :) lovely :)

    Thanks Vishesh>!

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  4. It’s the tears that console the soul and make us march forward without a least bit of fear! For me, tears are the best company when there is non to hear!!!

    When there is no one near
    The hearts outpourings to hear
    To march forward without fear
    I have to silently shed a tear

    Not good enough, but your comment brought it on Bubbly!

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  5. No harm in some welling up of eyes with joyful tears :)

    But do we keep joyful tears in arrears IHM?? :D

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  6. Loved this…succinct n heartfelt :)

    Thanks so much Sashu.

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  7. you have said so much and so deep in so few words. Marvelous !!!

    Balvinder, welcome to my page and thank you or the appreciation.

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  8. crying in the rain…a joy as good as singing in the rain..:)

    I agree, totally! Thanks Praveen.

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  9. Tears always heal, I have felt. Loved the emotion that surges in this!

    Thanks Usha. I eagerly await your comment on my verse (or prose for that matter!!) :D

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  10. That’s beautiful, Shail!

    The line that came to the mind reading this is ‘I love walking in the rain because nobody can see me crying’.

    BTW you are tagged.

    Solilo, ahh yes, something apt to go with these lines.
    I am swamped under tags!! :( Don’t know when I will get around to it!!

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  11. tears,tears,tears “they are the summer showers to soul” said alfred austin

    very simple yet so genuinely touching

    Welcome to my page Bindu. Indeed they are summer showers to the soul. What a beautiful way of putting it! Thanks for your lovely comment.

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  12. Expresses a sense of wistfulness- lovely!

    Thanks Manju! :)

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