Shail’s Nest

10 Responses to “All yours…”

1. Tim Buck on July 11th, 2009 at 22:36

   Hi, Shail. I like the way the short lines work to catapult the reader forward…with a gait like a fractured, ironic nursery rhyme (if that makes any sense). ~ Tim

   Me: Thanks Tim. That’s interesting, a gait like a fractured, ironic nursery rhyme!

2. tikulicious on July 12th, 2009 at 18:06

   Hi Shail
   truly captivating verse. loved it. simple yet highly effective.. keep sharing

   Me: Thanks Tikuli

3. Bob Hoff on July 13th, 2009 at 11:39

   I thought that I commented on this. Am I being a pair of nerds? (or paranoid)

   Were my comments removed because they were not appropriate enough. Are people laughing at my remarks, my thinking, my punctuation, my nerve in coming here? Do they think that I suffer from the residue of electro-shock therapy, the inability to express a thought, the habit of missing transitions, or understating generalizations.

   Do they see me a a former Marx brother or a member of George Bush’s cabinet? How long can I go on?

   Where is the doormat of welcome? Where is it?

   Where are my comments? Is it possible that I didn’t write them. me of writer motivation par large volume?

   Me: OMG Bob, you are making me laugh!! Lol, you had not commented here, but you commented on this somewhere else! *still smiling at Bob’s comment*

4. Kislay Chandra on July 13th, 2009 at 12:16

   Kickass !

   Me: Thanks!

5. Balvinder Singh on July 13th, 2009 at 12:43

   But hope should have been kept alive.

   Me: Hmmm… yeah maybe new shoot will sprout

6. Govind on July 14th, 2009 at 10:52

   Is it not a blunder
   to even think of plunder
   when willingly I surrender
   tearing my heart asunder?
   A victory for the vanquished over the raider.

   Me:

7. Indyeah on July 15th, 2009 at 01:45

   heart wrenching Shail.

   Me: Thanks Indy

8. Richette on July 15th, 2009 at 16:55

   Hi Shail! Can’t resist not to pay a visit here….

   “All Yours” is very catching!

   Missing you! {{{hugs}}} ^_^

   Me: Hey Richette, nice to see you here. Thanks! Hugs back at ya.

9. Richette on July 15th, 2009 at 16:57

   P.S.
   I just wonder why my flag next to my name is Australia….What happened to Philippine Flag??? Big wonder…???

   Me: *wondering too*

10. Usha on August 1st, 2009 at 22:25

    Awesome, the close!

    Me: Thanks Usha, those my fav lines too.

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