About the kisses…

This was written in answer to a tag over at sulekha.com. I was tagged by two of my friends, Kalpita tagged me to write about who I would like to kiss under the mistletoe (real or imaginary) and Edwin tagged me to write about my first kiss. I answered them at one go, in a single sweep. Here is what I told them:

Who would I want to kiss

Beneath the misltetoe

Kalpita wants to know

To her tag I cannot say ‘no’!

Then along comes Edwin

And puts me in a spin

‘You are tagged pretty Miss

Tell us of your first kiss’

Sulekha seems a-buzz

With spicy tales of buss

Should I reveal all

Or just make up a tale tall??

If I were not Shaila

But the legendary Laila

I would kiss Majnu

And whisper, ‘I love you’

As Shakespeare’s Juliet,

Romeo I would have bussed

And as Heer I would wait

For my Ranjha to be kissed

But I am good old Shaila

Not Heer, Juliet or Laila

Who do I want it to be

Holding and kissing me??

My love, the one I adore

With all my heart and more

Is the one I’d want to kiss

And never would want to miss.

Now coming to my first kiss

Sorry Edwin, got to admit this

I have not the least memory

Back then, I was a bawling baby.

Was it the one who gave birth

Or the one who brought her to earth??

As she held me to her chest

Was she who kissed me first??

At last I am done with my homework

The tags are done like clockwork

So friends, am I let off the hook??

Can I get back to my housework??

  • Shail Mohan (Jan 2009)

    Reposted from shail-mohan blogs @sulekha.com

26 Responses to “About the kisses…”

  1. How do words spring like a fountain;
    To me it is hard as climbing a mountain.
    Do you pluck it from the air?
    or do they fall on your lap without a care?

    Me: You are already spouting words like a fountain PRG!! :)

    I have come back to add this:

    You are spouting words like a fountain
    It isn’t as hard as climbing a mountain
    Just prod your gray cells into action
    With a gourd full of magic potion! ( That’s an Asterix and Obelix fan speaking!! :P )

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  2. That is so very loving,
    Housework is so boring,

    !!!!!!

    lovely !

    Me: Hey how about some more rhyming lines Dhiren?? :) Thanks.

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  3. awwwwww…. amazing!

    and Thanks! Now i know what to say when sum1 asks me abt my first kiss… Gawd Shail! u jus made my life so much easier! :)

    Me: Glad to have been of help Shaili! :P Thank you!

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  4. That is just beautiful and simple, Shail.


    Me: Thank you Solilo! :)

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  5. wow…an amazing set of rhymes you have there. hats off to you! (doffing imaginary hat)


    Me: Thank you Roopa! *takes a bow*

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  6. Shail,
    This is awesome writing. Loved the rhyme of Shaila and Laila.
    Kissing is like drinking salted water; you drink and your thirst increases.
    Cheers,
    Sal

    Me: Thanks Sal!

    Kissing is like drinking salt water
    You drink a little your thirst says ‘encore!’
    This is a fact we cannot ignore
    So without much ado kiss some more!

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  7. That was lovely :D Shaila and Laila… wah wah kya baat hai :D Mumma… can u get into my body for somedays… I want to write some blogs like you… Well… I sure I can’t become famous… but I sure would love to have some friends who can read at least a bit of what I write… hehe I seriously need some blog powers now to write good blogs :P

    Loved this one too as always :) (((((hugs)))))

    Me: Thanks da Bubbly. You know something?? Never long to be like some one else. Be your own self and you will be amazed at the result. This is the advice from someone from Neptune, not Earth. :)

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  8. That wasn’t any fun;
    Fully intended pun;
    Tell us the real stuff ;-)
    Don’t dodge us and run…

    Me: Haha Rakesh,

    I know it wasn’t fun
    And that was intended pun
    Let me dodge and run
    Its too hot in the sun!

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  9. u rhyme like a dream!! :)

    Me: Oh wow, thanks Sashu!

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  10. lol :P

    Me: Keep smiling Vishesh!

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  11. Well written! Liked it!

    Me: Thank you Rhett! :)

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  12. My love, the one I adore
    With all my heart and more
    Is the one I’d want to kiss
    And never would want to miss… That was BEAUTIFUL…

    Nice way to fool someone when they ask about the first kiss… Loved It…:-)

    Me: Welcome to my page Nirmal. Thanks for your appreciation! :)

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  13. Awww…that was simply lovely…loved the end :) and the rhyming of course!!!

    Me: Thanks for the appreciation Ganga! :)

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  14. That was cool :)

    Me: Thanks Pallavi! :)

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  15. Very clever, Shail! :)


    Me: Hehehe… Manju, one tries once in a while!! ;)

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  16. Beautiful,Shail!Loved every bit of the poem:)

    Me: Thanks Deeps! ;)

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  17. Too Good Shail :)

    Me: Thanks Chirag! :)

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  18. Lol!

    That was really neat! You and IHM make a grand rhyming pair, honestly!

    Nary a word not in place
    And yet you charm at that pace!

    Who kissed, who did not
    Your answers intrigue, a lot :)

    But shail, we will not wail
    Or even send you a mail
    To make sure that we avail
    Other details of the kiss tale :D !!!

    My two bytes of rhyme.. irresistible, when you and IHM, do this :)

    Me: Your two bytes of rhyme as you call it was awesome Usha!

    Who kissed me who did not
    My answers seem to intrigue you a lot
    For Fort Knox am I not
    To reveal many have tried a lot!!

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  19. very sweet !!!

    Me: Thanks Bindu! :)

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  20. Shaila, not only that you have done your tag so beautifully in lovely verse, but you have also pulled out so many more blogger friends who are poets. Thanks for doing that. Aur is se pahley ki “main kaheen kavi na ban jaoon teri padh ke yeh kavita’ i will close my comment.

    Me: Yes, I agree with you on that. Look at Usha’s and PRG’s responses! You should have tried your hand too. BTW looks like you are a Rafi fan. Thanks for your appreciation Balvinder.

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  21. bravo! super!
    clap clap clap

    Me: Thank you thank you Shilpa! *takes a bow* :)

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  22. Ha ha. A befitting end! The words are rhymed well.

    “At last I am done with my homework
    The tags are done like clockwork
    So friends, am I let off the hook??
    Can I get back to my housework??”

    Keep Blogging!

    Me: Thanks Biju for the appreciation! :)

    I try to do my bit
    To rhyme and make words fit
    And when readers notice it
    I am thrilled, I do admit.

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  23. Ohh was i supposed to rhyme,
    Sorry I didnt realise on time,

    Albeit now I am late,
    Making up is now my fate,

    Assume a long one should do,
    What else can I do,

    Valentines is today,
    Love is in the air today,

    Victory has come to Aam Junta,
    As ends the raj of goonda’s,

    Talking of kisses,
    Well i had a lot of misses,

    But today started with a kiss,
    It was wife and not any miss,

    Valentine has won the day,
    Guess it makes us all happy and gay !!

    Me: Thanks Dhiren, that was wonderful!

    Hey that was an excellent way
    To start Valentine’s day
    Now for aam junta let’s clearly say
    Three cheers… Hip Hip Hooray!!

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  24. LOL this sounds like fun.
    Though only thing hot
    We have here got,
    Is some not so subtle pun ;)
    It’s obvious Shail,
    doesn’t kiss and tell.


    Me: Haha IHM, that was good!

    IHM says it clear as a bell
    Shail obviously doesn’t kiss and tell
    Thus rests matters in a nutshell
    Let me now go answer the doorbell.

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  25. Yes Shail, i am a Md Rafi fan to the core of my heart. Read my post “My Exploits on Stage” under the lebel ‘my traits’. I have tried my hand at poetry too. Go to my other blog “Kalpana ki Udaan” under links.

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  26. like always i am filled with wonder!! i am amazed !
    i was verry interested to see who was your first kiss and who is your love…..and i still dont know!but what love declaration :
    “My love, the one I adore

    With all my heart and more

    Is the one I’d want to kiss

    And never would want to miss.”
    i love it !!!

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