Give me your hands
Let me keep them in mine
Kiss each and every line
They will be returned after a while…
- Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)
Shail's Nest
Where fingers tap dance…
Give me your hands
Let me keep them in mine
Kiss each and every line
They will be returned after a while…
- Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)
Is this what is called a hand loan?
repaying it you can indefinitely postpone,
the lines will tell you a story of their own
of how with your love I am drenched to the bone.
Simple and brilliant.
Hand loan??
As Govind said this seems to be a “Hand loan”.Probably the reason for delayed return could be, adding those “interest which could be even 100% per second”.
Ok, now ‘interest’ added to hand ‘loan!
ROFL! @hand loan!
Look at the creative responses Indy!! Hand loan and interests too!
Awwww…lovely!!!
Thanks
Sweet, really really sweet
Thank God I am not a diabetic!
I know, pj 
Awww..so touching!
Thank you
Lovely!!
Lovely as…??
Somehow I had the feeling that its not over yet…there are more lines to come…..
.Its beautiful.
Feeling incomplete…do add some more to it Shail
This is exactly the result one hopes to achieve. I am gratified I have been successful.
More will come in different forms. For the time being check this and this out Noor.
Children?
This made me think of my daughter Rai.
Amazing how so much can be said with so few words.
Very nicely done.
Welcome to Shail’s Nest Brenny.
Now this is why I never attempt to interpret either my poetry or fiction. I like the fresh perspectives that come in. Ahh the cute little hands of the little ones!! Thanks Brenny.
Baby’s hands? Are we returning the kisses which we took long back?
It could very well be baby hands Sandhya.
that’s what I thought too Shail. A baby’s handa and the promise of tommoorow:)
beautiful.
ugh typo.. *sigh*
Well I think that fits in rather well with the lines: a baby’s hands.
Thanks Indy.
awww Shail… these lines touched my heart
lovely!
Nice to see you Shaili…. and thank you!