Restless…

Turn right

Switch off the light

Turn left

It still doesn’t seem right

Thoughts like a kite

On wings, are on a flight

Somewhere inside like termites

Fears eat away tiny bite by bite

The cool night

And the moonlight

Only ignite

Emotions uptight

Lost in a cavern

In life’s downturn

I toss and turn

As restless my insides churn

Trying to discern

The new pattern

In fire I burn

For an upturn I yearn…

Should I re-learn or unlearn

Be stubborn or return

Or like the wick of the lantern

Selflessly and silently burn…??

- Shail Mohan (April 2010)

26 thoughts on “Restless…

    • Thanks Uma. :) Actually this was written for a creative challenge over at multiply.com, the topic of which for the week was ‘restless’. :)

  1. Shail, that was just mesmerising. How do you express emotions so well? I have known this feeling so well….to learn or unlearn or to be stubborn or silently burn…..
    that was beautiful. I wish I could put it so aptly.
    you know, I have copied it down in my note book because it feels like my very own emotion.

  2. Com’n Shail
    When you go to bed
    Just sink in the pillow
    Your worry less head

    And leave upto Him
    To worry for you
    ’cause if He brought you here
    He will also see you through

  3. So much restlessness.. and brought out very well. Just that I felt the rhyming was too much :-) ofcourse my nit-picking only :-) ))

    • Thanks Pal. Lol @ “the rhyming was too much”. Its the same…. some like blue, others like red and still others purple. Some like rhyming verse others don’t. It is just a matter of choice. :)

  4. Oh Wow!!!
    You actually wrote on being “restless”!!
    How DO you manage Shail?? I mean, its such an abstract topic!!
    Excellent presentation . Loved it :D

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