- a 55-word story.
“You haven’t done your home-work again!” the paan-chewing teacher spat exasperated.
He smiled insolently, not condescending to answer.
Some girls giggled. His eyes searched for her among them.
“Get out!” shouted the teacher.
He walked out of the class to the previously chosen tree, settling on a branch.
Now he could see her even better.
Cho chweet! Hey, you are getting to be good at this 55ers too
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Me: Thank you thank you! *takes a bow*
Vivek.
Me: Thanks Vivek!
Puppy love, is the apt title! Interesting story, Shail!
Me: Thanks Sandhya. Glad you liked the title!
LOL This sure brings back memories! All of us have experienced this kind of thing.
Me: Nostalgia time eh Ritu??
Wow !!! I want to try a 55 worder too…
good work shail…
Me: Thanks Mythi. Go for it. Waiting for one to come up soon!
cute…
Me: Thank you Sakhi.
Love doesn’t always find a way to triumph, does it? One must be creative and willing to solve obstacles as your character was. Very cute story, Shail!
Me: Indeed Bob, love that isn’t creative and willing to solve obstacles is no love!! Thank you!
May his love reach even greater heights
Me: Yeah Deeps! Lol, hope he doesn’t fall with a thud!
Beautiful expression of love.
Me: Thank you Oldmonk.
nice
like it!
Me: Thank you Kunal.
Aww… so cute! What happens to this kind of love as we grow older? Ah! Got it! Arthritis makes it rather difficult to nip up trees
Me: Haha, that is good. Arthritis does come in the way in later years!
Now THAT’s a fairy tale ending
Me: Lol Arch, yes it is!
Aww… Love this story Shail
Me: Thanks IHM!