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I count the grains of sand on the beach
They stretch as far as my eyes reach
When I am done I will tell you
Just how much I love you…
- Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)
Shail's Nest
Where fingers tap dance…
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| From Thru my eyes |
I count the grains of sand on the beach
They stretch as far as my eyes reach
When I am done I will tell you
Just how much I love you…
- Shail Mohan (Oct 2008)
Very Romantic…….Love is limitless….
Cheers!!!
Me: Indeed it is limitless. Thanks Unnichetta.
Oooooooh! I loved it ! Absolutely loved it!!!!
Me: Thanks Pal!
I shall wait till eternity
for you to finish
your counting
and hear those
three magical words.
Shail, nothing personal, just wanted to coin a reply
)
Me: That was a beautiful response Balvinder.
I bet that’s what you’d tell Jeet (name correct??) if she were to recite these lines to you! 
Profound and so beautifully put. Wonderful verse
Me: Thanks Ritu.
Counting the grains in the beach will take all eternity
Am I supposed to let you do that and wait patiently
Is this the sinister part of you that is always tricky
telling me that you never thought of loving me?
I wish I could. I mean, publish !!!
Me: Lol, Govind, you have a new angle to it there!
Hmm… about publishing
‘Publish’ says the public
And I sort of panic
Isn’t it really tragic
Publishing is no picnic
My writing is sporadic
though it seems prolific
So I remain a skeptic
And about publishing a little phobic
Hey, Shail, Is a competition going on here?! Yours and all the other poems are fabulous, really!
Me: I too love the responses here. Thanks Sandhya!
I am a zero in coining words! Enjoyed reading this post, Shail!
Me: Ahhh who knows. One day you might be in a mood to write a few lines Sandhya!
I am demanding & impatient
just write it down on a parchment.
Super poem maam
Me: Lol @impatient Thanks Aditya.
How do you write such lovely lines?
What thoughts with what ideas combine?
Shail your brilliance simply shines!
And your readers comments make this blogpost divine
Me: Thanks IHM for the comment in verse! Yeah, I definitely like the comments too!
Shail, do I even need to say this?
How do you write such beautiful lines? How many posts of yours I have bookmarked..you know.
Me: Oh well …. *blush blush* Thanks a lot Solilo.
Woof woof!
Now here are the lines that portray love in its sheer simplicity and elegance! loved it!
Me: Oh wow a dog that appreciates poetry??!
I took a look at your blog page and am am definitely going back for more. Thanks for dropping by Kaalicharan and the compliments.
Hi Shail, I like your blog a lot. So I have an award for you
. Please do visit my blog to collect it.
Me: In a jiffy! *rushes off*
Nice poem…. loved it.
Me: Thank you!
Beautiful,simply beautiful shail.I’m much in awe of you,needless to say it though,you know it
Me: Thank you Deeps!! I am overwhelmed.
Aaawww…..
Me:
“Love is like a handful of sand,for it will fall down if held too tightly and will fly away if held too lightly” …
Me: Thats a good one Nimmy
But I believe whether you hold it tightly or lightly or just rightly (omg that rhymed!!) if it has to go it will. Just a little piece of my own philosophy. 
“Love-don’t hold it too light or too tight..Just let it free..If it fly away,it was never yours..”
Me: I used the phrase ‘just right’ to mean ‘let it free’