My eyes search for smoke signals
Lazily curling spirals
Bringing me news about you from lands far off
And also love in bushels.
My eyes search for smoke signals
Lazily curling spirals
Bringing me news about you from lands far off
And also love in bushels.
Me: Thanks Chirag
Kaun hai woh?
Me: A figment of my imagination??
I can picture it. I draw a steamer coming to port with love-laden cargo
. Or did you perchance think of a steam engine?
Me: Hmm…. I don’t want to interfere with the pictures your imagination has conjured up!
like solilo… woh kaun hai…????
Me: (as to Solilo) A figment of my imagination??
Ummm.. and yummm… love in bushels…
Loved the wisp of love trailing from this lovely poem!
Me: Your comments are special Usha!
‘Wisp of love trailing…’ How romantic!!
Abstract art. Just too good.
Me: Thank you so much Balvinder. You could see an abstract side to it!
hmmmm…. [Thinking. tapping the side of my forehead with my forefinger]
and hey, u’ve been tagged.
Me: So has the tapping resulted in some enlightenment??
OMG another tag?!!! :O
Very much like a haiku. Liked it very much
Me: Thanks Ritu! You up too, like me eh??
Poetically correct but technologically we have emails and telephones. Gone are the days our forefathers used to wait for the ships
The four line poem laurels your current state of mind. Wish you get it…
Keep Blogging!
Me: Thanks Biju. I don’t want to interfere with the picture your brain has conjured up for you when you read the lines!
Both Roopa and you see ships/steamers. BTW there are places on earth still not connected and there are situations in life where you are not connected as well.
beautiful…could see and smell the scene
Me: Thanks Ganga. What picture did you see??
A hillside dotted with tiny yellow flowers nodding in the breeze….a lazily meandering river…a steamboat from beyond the bend…only the smoke starting to be seen curling up….tho’ this might be technically wrong…smelled woodsmoke
Me: Ganga, that’s beautiful! But… but…. I wonder why none thought of …oh well, let me wait and see.
Hey,I cant leave a comment on your picture tag..the page is not opening properly!Hence leaving a comment here.
Thanks for doing the tag,Shail.Its good to know that the lazy-bug has finally woken up…LOL!!I do belive you when you say your bad habit is laziness..
You love singing too..WOW!!would love to hear you sing!maybe when I’m in TVM next!
Me: Its working now Deepti. Its more like putting off tags as I want to write other things!
Lol. Now that too many are pending I finally woke up to take action! OMG don’t think I sing… that is only a dream!!
We will not let you till you tire
There is no smoke without fire
Our curiosity to soothe
please tell us the truth
Me: OMG PRG, you are turning our to be quite a nimisha kavi or instant poet!
All that smoke without fire
Now seems to backfire
Imagination like wild fire
Is what I will now require
Awww that’s romantic
Sho shweeth
Me:
Thanks shweethie pie.